Reflection 2.1

While I was researching I found it difficult to find relevant research. It took some rethinking on my part to adjust my paper, in order to incorporate data. I think the research guide on ithacalibrary.com definitely help out with finding research quickly. It was weird because I found myself writing much more than I expected towards the end of my paper. I also tried to use more acknowledgement and response than some of the articles we discussed in class. For my next draft I think I'll look back into organization just to make sure it's okay, and check up on grammar and diction.